Island Life - Pokemon RP

EDIT: ...I'd really like some feedback on my drawings. Seriously. I get some faves, but no comments. Please, tell me something.

THIS TOOK ME LIKE AN HOUR AND A HALF ASDFGHJKL:" NO COMPLAINING
I'm actually really proud of this drawing. Excluding Gavin, because I failed at drawing him. Plus, I forgot to make him shiny so I had to go back and color over the red. Thank goodness Bisharp's red parts become darker blue when he's shiny.
It's for a private role-play on bulbagarden forums with me and two other people.
Of course, there are a lot of other characters throughout the RP, but I just showed the main ones...

Anyway, I hope you all enjoy the drawing, and I also hope the scanner didn't butcher my drawing too much.

Also, I KNOW that I drew the Dewott's skirt-thing horribly out of place. Also, the Riolu is tilted and the Bisharp is just plain horrible. But I hope you like it anyway ^^
Oh, and I didn't outline Larvitar's belly with pen. Oh, well.
Look at me, being a pessimist and dedicating a whole paragraph to what I did wrong.

Also, Max (Riolu) will be featured in some other stuff... possibly a future comic... and his human-self (with nothing to do with the Riolu. A completely separate story- he'll be in ELLA KAL, if I ever get around to writing that one.)